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"Throughout this succinct essay, you did a good job of explaining your reasons for choosing this particular university. If the word limit allows, I think a little information about yourself would be a great addition. Is there a specific incident that sparked your interest in electrical engineering (no pun intended)? Besides this, your formatting was not to MLA standards, but was clear and consistent nonetheless. If MLA formatting is required for this assignment, you can find several great formatting resources online, including our MLA guide. As far as conventions go, you did have some repeated errors (run-on sentences, capitalization issues, etc) that impact the readability of your writing, so be sure to proofread carefully! With some editing, however, you will have a good, short essay."
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Kibin. (2025). Why i chose my university. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-i-chose-my-university-PjswIJfo
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