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Hearts start to beat faster palms develop into rain clouds and hands tremble so vigorously it descends down your legs shaking the ground The beginning of love has taken over with no plans to stop Flawless as she picks at her face and gorgeous as ever when she when she tells herself she isnt She is the most breathtaking woman I only hope that I can compare to We love each other at no charge and always have The beautiful creation of our love started off merely as friends with a magnetic attraction As we talked to each other anyone could smell the flirting in the air although we were unable to be anything more than friends at the time After a while of not being allowed to speak to each other the person I was with went out of the picture and we were able to talk again She was there to comfort and help me with what I was going through We fell into a wonderful progression of love and she became my one and only My girlfriend is the best girlfriend because she is supportive affectionate and funFirst of all my girlfriend is the best girlfriend because she is very supportive For example at one point in my life I became depressed and needed help to get myself out I hurt myself in countless ways and my mind became plagued with evil thoughts She talked me through the hard nights and stayed up late just to make sure I was okay She gave me inspiration to stop beating myself up and to take a deep breath In addition my girlfriend and I laid in bed one night flipping through the channels on television and I became very emotional for no reason I cried my eyes out simply because its what my body wanted to do After a dreadful half an hour she grew tired of watching me suffer and stepped outside it
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