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As a Crenshaw High School senior preparing to graduate I have already attained more education then other members in my family My mother has always pushed me to excel in school because she never had the opportunity to finish high school Similarly my sister Cynthia has not had time to complete high school because of her one year old son Gabriel My step father had to drop out of the 6th grade to help his family put food on the table I want to take advantage of all the opportunities that were taken away from my family members I not only want to be successful for myself but also strive to be the educational example for my younger sister that I never hadIn my everyday life I see or hear of people struggling to make a comfortable living for themselves and families because my community is considered a minority Experiencing this motivates me to get my education I always want to be proud of where I came from and of the obstacles I had to overcome to be a successful person When I hear successful stories of people that came from communities similar to mine and are able to achieve their dreams motivates me to the same No one will ever stop me from achieving my dreams because I really desire them Education means everything to me and my family I feel very blessed to have the opportunity to get an education I will make myself and family proud
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