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Why I Will Vote For the Canadian Liberal Party in the 2021 Elections

This is an essay written by an author who answered the question: Who will I vote for and why? The author analyzes aspects of the Canadian political parties to decide that they will vote for the Liberal party. While the author mentions that while the Liberal, New Democratic Party, and Conservatives have some of the same talking points, the Liberal party appears to have more realistic goals. The Liberal party is focused on the COVID-19 crisis, the cost of childcare, and climate change.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You did an excellent job communicating the purpose of your paper by including a detailed introduction that ends with a clear, guiding thesis statement. You also have included great content in your writing by including facts that support your main points and positions. I suggest that you make sure that you cite any information you obtained from a source to avoid potential plagiarism issues. The main reason I gave a lower score for the paper's organization is that you did not write the conclusion in a way that made the paper come full circle. While you did excellent summarizing the main points that you made in the body of the paper, it was not evident in the conclusion that you are answering the question of who you will vote for. The paper is perfectly formatted, enhancing the readability, but grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors are scattered throughout the essay that need to be resolved."

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