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Why I Would Choose to be Katniss Everdeen

A student is asked to describe which character from The Hunger Games she would choose to be and explains why she would select the main character, Katniss. The student describes the character's intelligence, proficiency with a bow, and courage as the qualities that most appeal to her.
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Erin's feedback:

"You did a nice job setting up your purpose for writing in your introduction and including a clear thesis statement that guides your essay. You also supported your main ideas with solid examples from the text. Some of the transitions between your paragraphs feel a bit forced, so you might pare those down a little. For instance, you don't need both "Moreover" and "the second reason" to start your second body paragraph. The mechanical errors aren't numerous, but some of them are repeated; watch out for comma splices between complete sentences, be sure to italicize book titles, and ensure that the author's name is spelled correctly."

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