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Why Macbeth Is Responsible for His Own Downfall

A writer analyzes the downfall of Shakespeare's Macbeth, concluding that Macbeth is responsible for his own tragic end due to murder, ambition, and gullibility.
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Erin's feedback:

"You did a good job of organizing your essay and focusing each paragraph on a single topic, and of using quotations from the text to support your claims about Macbeth's responsibility for his downfall. Your thesis is clear, but it would be great to include some additional background information in your introductory paragraph: about the play, about the "debate" over Macbeth's downfall and who is responsible, etc. In other words, you want to lead your reader to the thesis, rather than immediately presenting it. In your conclusion, be careful that you're not restating your thesis word for word. Finally, there are some spelling errors ("Duncun") and grammar, punctuation, and grammar errors to resolve before your turn in your essay."

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