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Why Macbeth Is Responsible for His Own Downfall

This essay argues that Shakespeare's Macbeth is responsible for his own downfall. The student discusses how ambition and fear make Macbeth insecure and susceptible to manipulation and immoral behavior.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You've done a good job keeping the discussion focused on your thesis. The organization is logical and easy to follow, and you make sure to support your discussion with quotes from the play each step of the way. This is a great way to engage with the text, but I did find that some of the quotations you chose did not seem to be most directly supporting the discussion. I suggest you look over your source usage and either use your own commentary to tie the quotes more clearly to the discussion or think about if there are other quotes that would do more work for your argument. Finally, keep in mind your style guide in formatting your paper (double-space per MLA) and when citing the play (act and scene)."

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