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My sister is truly the most respected and looked up to person in my life We have had our ups and downs but she is always there for me when I need her and I am always there for her when I can be We have a bond that nobody or anything could break As close as we are today I can say I would be completely lost without her She is my shining star and my rock to lean on during the hard timesWhenever I see her it puts a smile on my face Looking into her blue eyes and seeing that beautiful smile of hers can warm a persons heart At first glance of her happy face you feel a sense of comfort Her wavy black shoulder length hair makes her picture perfect It matches her ivory complexion making her look as if she belongs in a magazine I still have my moments where I feel weird calling her my big sister because she is shorter than I am Her being short is one of her traits that just make her so loveable Being around her just makes me want to hug her and tell her how much of a joy it is to have someone so sweet and kind in my life Do not get me wrong she is not always sweet she is a human too and has a temper to her But I love both sides of herThe saying actions speak louder than words are a very true statement with her When I walk through the door and see a smile first thing I know she is in a good mood Deborah my sister has many facial expressions that go with her many moods This is one of her best traits but yet at the same time is a bad thing at times Her body language is also very fun to watch while she is talking She is the type
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