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Why Oprah Winfrey Is a Global Servant Leader

In this hero essay, a student discusses why Oprah Winfrey is a global servant leader. The student summarizes Oprah's childhood and explains how it has influenced her career and business decisions.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your admiration for Oprah comes through in your writing, and it's good that you were able to provide specific facts and examples to support your observations about her. Your essay has been put together well in terms of writing conventions, but the organization of your body paragraphs is a bit confusing. Your work initially comes off as a strictly informative piece since you start with a lot of biographical information and then transition into your argument about why she is an exemplary servant leader. To improve the flow of your work and keep the reader cognizant of your argument, consider first deciding on some key reasons why Oprah is a great leader and then building your body paragraphs around these different reasons. Then you can weave in relevant pieces of background information when needed in a given body paragraph."

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