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Why People Take off Their Shoes before Entering A Home

In this analytical essay, a student discusses the practice of taking one's shoes off before entering one's home. The student explains how this cultural tradition has both philosophical and practical roots that center on leaving the unclean outdoors behind upon entering an intimate indoor space.
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Angela's feedback:

"You've put together a solid discussion about the practice of taking off one's shoes before entering one's home. It made sense to provide background information on the origins of the practice before delving into your personal experiences with and observations about it. Overall, your essay is written very well and thus has a nice flow to it. Some editing should be done though depending on how closely you're expected to follow MLA guidelines. For example, your paper should be double-spaced (2.0 spacing), and double quotation marks should be used instead of single ones. In terms of writing conventions, you should watch out for any excessively long sentences because those are places where errors tend to pop up. Generally, if a sentence runs for more than three lines, you should consider cutting your statement into multiple pieces for enhanced clarity."

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