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Why Pizza is the Best Food in the World

This is a persuasive essay in which the author was tasked with convincing the reader why pizza is the best food to choose. The author discusses in detail how pizza satisfies the brain and how it creates billions of dollars for the economy.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a good job creating a nicely formatted and well-organized essay. While your first paragraph provides a solid stance and a creative introduction, you do have the opportunity to elaborate on the thesis statement a bit by also talking about pizza being a large, money making business. There are occasional grammar and sentence structure errors that need to be resolved but, for the most part, you have a good command of written language. Consider elaborating on the conclusion, which is an opportunity to summarize all the main points made in the essay and to reiterate the goal of the paper. You mentioned that you are supposed to be following MLA style conventions, but the paper does not reflect this."

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