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Why Shakespeare's "Romeo and Juliet" is No Longer Relevant

In this persuasive essay, the student argues that Shakespeare's "Romeo and Juliet" is no longer relevant to contemporary audiences due to its out-dated themes.
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Natalie's feedback:

"You make some great points about "Romeo and Juliet" and its relevancy to the 21st century reader/viewer. Overall, you stayed true to your purpose and provided several relevant examples from the play. There were, however, several conventional errors. These included tense inconsistencies (i.e., "Romeo and Juliet is written..." rather than "Romeo and Juliet was written...") and run-on sentences. The best way to catch these errors is to read your writing aloud to see where you might stumble a bit or run out of breath. I also felt that you struggled a bit with integrating quotes, which made them seem out of place at times. In addition to this, you list your formatting style as Chicago but did not follow Chicago formatting. Whether this or another formatting style (APA, MLA, etc.) is the one required, make sure to reference an online style guide so that you are formatting properly. With some corrections, you'll have a great paper!"

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