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Why the Animal Rebellion Failed in Animal Farm by George Orwell

In this analytical essay, a student explains why the animal rebellion failed in Animal Farm by George Orwell. The student discusses the cycle of revolution, the use of propaganda, and the prevalence of corruption in the story.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have a valid thesis statement, and you provide some good analysis of the book. However, your essay should be formatted in a consistent manner to make it easier to read. For example, the first line of each paragraph should be indented so that the reader can readily distinguish when a paragraph ends and a new one begins. Your use of quotes would be more effective if they were integrated into your own statements, and when including a parenthetical citation at the end of a quote, the period goes after the citation itself instead of before the closing quotation mark. The title of a book should be italicized while the name of a song is placed in quotation marks. Consistent use of either single or double quotation marks would give your work more polish. Review should be done to ensure exactly one space appears between sentences and between words in the essay, and editing is needed to recast run-on sentences and address problems with subject-verb agreement."

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