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Why The Bahamas Should be Considered a Developing Nation

In this argumentative essay, the writer argues that The Bahamas qualifies as a developing nation. The writer cites poverty, dependence on a primary industry, and the lack of natural resources to support their claim.
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Erin's feedback:

"Your overall argument is clear and well-supported with cited, factual information from credible sources. Starting your introduction with a definition was effective and helped to set the stage for your own argument. When you refer to the author in your thesis statement, it's not clear whether you're referring to yourself or to the author you mention earlier in your introduction, so be sure to clarify that. The errors in the paper are numerous enough to be distracting and cause some confusion, especially since words are sometimes skipped/missing. While proofreading, watch out for missing words, punctuation errors (especially commas), grammar errors, and sentence structure issues, especially working quotations into the surrounding text smoothly."

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