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Water sand and the sun are all things that you can find on Alki beachThese three things all represent me as caring strong and loyal Allthese parts make up for alki beach They also make up for who i amtoday Each one can be made to make someones day to go better I am alkibeach because i am Sand Water and the sunI am sand because i am strong enough to let the waves hit me when thegoing gets tough Here are three examples to show and tell that i amstrong My first example would be the time my Aunt died I wasdevastated and and only eleven at the time I was upset but ididnt letmyself get depresseed I was strong enough to hold it together becuase ifelt that i had to support my mom because it was her sister and i didntwant her to feel worse It was a sad time in my life but i was strongenough to keep it together just how the sand keeps the water separatedfrom the land to make a beach My second example would bethe time mystepmom punched my brother This time was a hard time period to gothrough because it was serious and everything was so upside down Mybrother was living with my dad at the time so when it happend they werefar from us because my dad lives in oregon I was strong to keep myfeelings and anger in during this period just how the sand holds insmall shells from the ocean My third example of being strong would haveto be the time that my mom was in the hospital for a week for her backMy mom was in the hospital for one week because she had injured her backwhile working I had to take care of my younger brother and it was hardDuring this time it was sad devastating and lonley without mom but ikept myself strong and kept going Now to conclude my paragraph
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