Why the Cons of Year-Round School Outweigh the Pros

This persuasive essay argues against year-round schools. The student favors a school year oriented around a summer break, focusing on how the different schedules impact learning as well as student mental health.

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"You are off to a good start. You've organized your argument into a four-paragraph structure that introduces the topic, explains your position, provides counter-argumentation, and then concludes. This is a solid approach that ensures the reader can follow the presentation.

In addition to proofreading to make sure your points are clear and you are building good ethos, there are a few other steps to take to sharpen persuasiveness. First, avoid making general claims that can't be backed up by evidence. Use sources to strengthen the claims about how students learn, the facilities at year-round schools (ACs), and mental health. This can also help address the second area to focus on: some of the points are a little hard to follow. Specific claims will help here, as well as making sure your language is precise for your reader. When you write "This can affect the learning..." (paragraph 2) or "It also helps..." (para. 3) it's not clear what "This" and "It" refer to. Precise language allows your reader to keep up so they can focus on the ideas."

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(Kibin, 2025)

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Kibin. (2025). Why the cons of year-round school outweigh the pros. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-the-cons-of-year-round-school-outweigh-the-pros-VC9XndZd

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("Why the Cons of Year-Round School Outweigh the Pros.")

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"Why the Cons of Year-Round School Outweigh the Pros." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-the-cons-of-year-round-school-outweigh-the-pros-VC9XndZd

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1. "Why the Cons of Year-Round School Outweigh the Pros." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-the-cons-of-year-round-school-outweigh-the-pros-VC9XndZd.

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"Why the Cons of Year-Round School Outweigh the Pros." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-the-cons-of-year-round-school-outweigh-the-pros-VC9XndZd.