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Why the Movie Lionheart Falls Short of Its International Acclaim

This analytical essay focuses on the movie Lionheart. The student analyzes the themes and genre classification to show why the movie does not live up to its international acclaim.
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Crystal's feedback:

"You do a nice job highlighting specific elements about Lionheart that you feel make it undeserving of international acclaim and including specific examples. However, the focus of your essay isn't immediately clear (some background is okay, but shouldn’t be the entire focus of the intro), you're lacking a thesis statement, and the content is not well-organized flow-wise (more transitions would improve the essay). Ideally, your intro should end with a clear thesis statement that captures exactly what you're analyzing and the broader point of the paper. Your points of analysis in the middle paragraph are also a bit rapid-fire and not well-connected; the points would be stronger if you streamlined them into a more logical progression and analyzed each point in relation to your thesis statement (once defined clearly). You do make some great broader points in your final paragraph, but your concluding paragraph should not introduce new information. Part of the issue might be that you’re trying to include too much information. A reverse outline might help you re-organize your content more logically and pare down the info to what’s most important. Finally, you write well in terms of diction overall, but punctuation and grammar errors pop up in some areas; a good edit for punctuation and grammar once you tighten up your focus would ensure your essay is strong on all fronts."

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