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Why the Theory of Divine Creation Makes Sense

This is a response to a question. The author was tasked with answering which theory of life makes the most sense to them and why. The author chose the theory of divine creation. The author identifies as a religious Christian person who believes in creationism. They emphasize that all things are perfect (living organisms, outer space) because a perfect God creates them. They also mention the Book of Genesis (God created all things) and how Jesus came down to Earth to tell the world that God is real.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You are off to a great start with your work. There are no formatting issues, which helps increase reader comprehension. You also did an excellent job making sure that your writing maintains focus on answering the question. However, I do have several recommendations that you can take into consideration to improve the paper. First, regarding content, I feel like much of your reasoning is too simplistic. I know there has been research done to prove the divine creation theory. Consider finding some of this research and using it as a source to justify your position on divine creation. Often, you abruptly jump from one idea to the next. You can resolve this by adding transitional phrases and sentences to create relationships between concepts. Last, there are a significant number of grammar and sentence structure errors in the writing. Consider having someone help you proofread the work and provide specific feedback."

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