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Why Wind Turbines are Economically and Ecologically Advantageous

In this essay, the student outlines two main arguments, one financial and one ecological, for switching from fossil fuels to green energy generated by wind turbines.
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Natalie's feedback:

"The debate about fossil fuels versus green energy certainly continues to be one of the biggest topics. You did a good job of explaining your stance, but your thesis could be stronger. Remember: the thesis sets the stage for the rest of the essay. At times, the data from your sources was a bit unclear, particularly in the second paragraph. Some conventional errors throughout also impacted the flow of your writing. Additionally, I would recommend you reference an MLA style guide, as your paper was not formatted correctly. Other than this, however, your formatting was clear, if not necessarily consistent (paragraphs should typically all be pretty much the same size). You have a good first draft, and with some editing, you could have a great paper."

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