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Women in Ancient Greece and Rome: An Analysis

This essay is a comparison of women's roles and rights in ancient Greece and Rome. The author explores the differences in freedoms that women had, while also looking at the similarity that women were expected to bear children and run the household in both societies.
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"The focus of this essay is clear, and there is a lot of great evidence included here. The first sentence in this essay could be strengthened by including the focus of the paper. You have included a number of examples of the way women were seen in these ancient societies. Please elaborate on some of these ideas. For example, you note that women were seen as childlike. Why were they viewed this way? You cite a few references within the text, but be sure to include a more extensive bibliography at the end of your essay. Please include ideas from these other references to better show your understanding of the current literature on this topic. You may also wish to cite additional academic papers that address the issues of women's rights in ancient Greece and Rome. The organization of this paper is a little unusual. To improve the readability of this essay, please align the paragraphs on the left side of the paper and indent the first sentence of each paragraph. There are some grammar issues that should be addressed before submitting this paper."

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