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It was a hot and humid June day in Georgia the kind of typical summer weather that leads to violent thunderstorms in the late afternoon With the drought we had been experiencing however our last good rainfall was two months prior I was pushing the speed limit and then some as I barreled down the road Even with the windows of my car fully down the hot air smacked my face like the heat of an oven I was late and I hate being late especially when I first meet people I was following the directions Amy had given me to her house but when they called for me to turn off the main road onto a rutted dirt road I hesitated I stopped the car and did a double take between the directions and the street sign to make sure they were right Everything looked okay so I put up my windows and proceeded down the dry dirt road at a much more leisurely pace as to minimize the amount of dust I kicked up I traveled down that road for about a mile and when it curved to travel around a small lake I saw what had to be her house The only one on the road cedar shingles and a small pickup truck parked in the driveway As I parked my car behind the pickup and made my way up to the front porch I heard a dog barking from the backyard When I rang the bell a teenage boy in a bathing suit and still wet and dripping greeted me Is Amy here I asked but before he could reply I heard Im up here quickly followed by her feet pounding down the stairs She too looked like she had just finished swimming wearing only a pair of shorts over her suit Her hair was tied back attractively into a ponytail where the ends of it left a
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