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Your Perspective, My Perspective, Reality

This informational essay is about how people perceive things differently, giving many examples of how differently people view events and words.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"You gave a good example at the beginning of the paper about perspective and how differently people perceive things. You want to be sure you are using a focus statement in your introduction, as this will ensure the reader understands what your paper will be discussing in the next paragraphs. You also want to be sure that you are supporting all information given. Near the end of the paper, you want to continue to support the claims about the differences between children and adults understanding danger. When organizing the paper, you want to ensure you have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Since your paper said you were using the Harvard formatting style guide, you would want to ensure it is used for in-text citations, title, etc. You would benefit from a solid round of proofreading to ensure all issues with punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure are resolved before submitting your work."

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