YaShekia K.

There was grammar mistakes. "As an ABA therapist, I work closely", should be "As an ABA therapist, I worked closely". Most important for essays is to check for grammar. Luckily, I caught it. As an ABA therapist, I worked closely with Ryan at home and in school, but some weren't.. In addition, the essays needed to be under 1,000 characters.

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Brilliant. Thank you for your work, YaShekia.

I have to say, there are editors out there who really do like to cut back on words; and although this editor can do the same (and considered important for academic pieces) while making it highly readable, I suspect that this editor knows the mechanics of good grammar better than most. Her use of parallelism is a good example. Other editors may not even suggest it, but this editor will. And yes, the readability does improve. As with all edits, always choose what's best for your writing piece, and note her excellent reasoning for certain edits, which will help you to understand where she is coming from. She hides a wealth of experience in editing.

Thank you so much for helping me with my paper :) Your comments are really helpful :)