I have to say, there are editors out there who really do like to cut back on words; and although this editor can do the same (and considered important for academic pieces) while making it highly readable, I suspect that this editor knows the mechanics of good grammar better than most. Her use of parallelism is a good example. Other editors may not even suggest it, but this editor will. And yes, the readability does improve. As with all edits, always choose what's best for your writing piece, and note her excellent reasoning for certain edits, which will help you to understand where she is coming from.
She hides a wealth of experience in editing.
Anonymous
Thank you so much for helping me with my paper :) Your comments are really helpful :)
Rebekah K.
Thank you very much for your thorough editing and helpful feedback!
Siran L.
Thank you for your help. Your edits were very helpful.