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English 1010-27 One Bad SHO On your sixteenth birthday all you ever want is a car to cruise in have fun be free Well for my sixteenth birthday I was given a car It was a 1994 Ford Taurus SHO The SHO stood for Super High Output and believe me it had it It was the most beautiful car I had ever seen It was a blue color like the sky at midnight shinny chrome wheels and 240 raw horses under the hood I loved that car and I was determined to let everyone know that I had just started school and I was determined to show off my car and its power And I remember my dad telling me this car has a lot of kick in it so be careful Of coarse I was rebellious and did just the opposite of what he told me anytime I had a long stretch of road I would floor it with the wind in my hair and the stereo blaring just living Then people started coming up to me and telling how nice my car was Id just smile and say thanks in a cocky sort of way My car and I were inseparable but that would soon come to an end It was September 13 I was getting out of school and some friends asked me for a ride home so I said sure I was traveling down woody road going about 55 and this road only had enough room in the lane for your car When I had dropped my friends off I left the neighbor hood and started to head home As Im heading home I round this curve that Im taking pretty fast So to take the curve better I drift into the other lane a little bit when I saw another car I panicked and jerked the wheel hitting a ditch nose first and flipping my car
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