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Hanan Elaraby 21204 Ms Pryor 7th grade birth day this really happened I woke up so every happy because it was my birth day I was turning thirteen I knew it was going to be a great day I just had that feeling Also my grandma was coming from Jordan That made me feel even more excited than I already was I went to school it was a Friday as always Some of my friends had given me gifts Second period came that was PE We when I say we my friend Elizabeth and me So we were walking back to the locker rooms and shes like Hanan catch and the next thing you know shes kicking her shoe to me and I m waiting for it to get to me Instead it goes on the roof uh-oh was what we said So then all the others get there by that time we were ahead of them before They all stop and ask What happened I started laughing And Elizabeth pointed up One of the girls asked How did it get up there and Elizabeth told them So they decided to pick up one of the girls so she could grab the shoe As they were lifting her she yelled at them to put her down The thing was shes afraid of heights So I volunteered And let me tell you that roof is pretty high The first thing I did was sort of sit on the roof top Then I grabbed the shoe threw it down and looked at the scenery Boy was it beautiful I got down because I saw the janitor But dont worry I didnt get into trouble Elizabeth couldnt stop thanking me That made me feel so happy And even more special I had Liz in my 4th period class Third period I had science Boy was it boring Then came forth period They sang happy
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