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A good experience with my friends came on my sixteenth birthday Earlier in the week I had decided that I would rent a limousine and go into Boston with some of my friends The day which we would go was my birthday The day had finally come and we were all anxious to go Before the limo came five of my friends Nick John Luke Eric and Jay met at my house As we eagerly anticipated the arrival of the limo it finally came At that very moment we ran outside and jumped into the limo we were finally off Our first destination in Boston was the Hard Rock Cafe for a bite to eat After enjoying ourselves at the Hard Rock we headed out to do some shopping First we headed to Niketown Then we went to the Gap and Tower Records where we did not see anything that we really wanted With that in mind we headed out to a store that we all knew we would like Abercrombie Fitch After an hour in the store we all came out with something Then we returned into the limo and had Felix our driver take us around town to have some more fun After driving around to a few more places we decided to return home The night was not over yet With over ninety minutes of time left on the limo we decided to pick up some friends in Methuen and drive around After we returned home we picked up four of our good friends After driving around town for over an hour we had to bring everyone home and call it a night After a few people went home a couple of my friends decided at my house This was definitely a birthday that I will always remember This was a great experience for my friends and me Although it was one of the many good times had shared together this
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