scroll to top
Stuck on your essay?
Get ideas from this essay and see how your work stacks up
Word Count: 671
The cheerful girl with bouncy golden curls was almost fiveWaiting with her mother at the checkout stand she saw thema circle of glistening white pearls in a pink foil boxQuickly the mother checked the back of the little foil box and then looked back into the pleading blue eyes of her little girls upturned faceA dollar ninety-five Thats almost 200Ill think of some extra chores for you and in no time you can save enough money to buy them for yourselfYour birthdays only a week away and you might get another crisp dollar bill from Grandma As soon as Jenny got home she emptied her penny bank and counted out 17 penniesAfter dinner she did more than her share of chores and she went to the neighbor and asked Mrs McJames if she could pick dandelions for ten centsOn her birthday Grandma did give her another new dollar bill and at last she had enough money to buy the necklaceThey made her feel dressed up and grown upShe wore them everywhere Sunday school kindergarten even to bedThe only time she took them off was when she went swimming or had a bubble bath Mother said if they got wet they might turn her neck green Jenny had a very loving daddy and every night when she was ready for bed he would stop whatever he was doing and come upstairs to read her a storyOne night when he finished the story he asked Jenny Do you love meOh yes Daddy You know that I love youThen give me your pearls Oh Daddy not my pearlsBut you can have Princess - the white horse from my collectionThe one with the pink tail Remember DaddyThe one you gave me Shes my favoriteThats okay Honey Daddy loves you Good nightAnd he brushed her cheek with a kissAbout a week later after the story time Jennys daddy asked againDo you love me Daddy you know I love youThen give
@Kibin is a lifesaver for my essay right now!!
- Sandra Slivka, student @ UC Berkeley
Wow, this is the best essay help I've ever received!
- Camvu Pham, student @ U of M
If I'd known about @Kibin in college, I would have gotten much more sleep
- Jen Soust, alumni @ UCLA