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What Birthday Spinning out of control like a tornado I couldnt control myself My vision was blurred into a mosaic painting palms were sweating and mouth was dry I didnt know what to do I needed to sit or down or I would fall down My stomach was churning like an ocean I think I might be sick I was drenched with sweat in the middle of winter My entire body was numb I could hear muffled voices ringing in the back of my head Is he all right What should we do with him The noise was killing me and everything was a haze Is this what its supposed to feel like I asked myself over and over like a broken record They told me Just have a little it wont kill you It was my birthday and this is how I was going to spend it Lying on the floor in a heap like a helpless baby This was going to be a birthday that I would never forget or remember the way I was headed I needed help I needed help really bad I began to drag my helpless body from the floor Im up Im up I declared Then as I took the first step I began to wobble to and fro Just as I wouldve hit the ground with a thud someone caught me They whispered something in my ear your guess is as good as mine is to what they said I would owe my life to this person As they scooped my limp body off the floor and took me to the bathroom I caught a glimpse of my savior It was my best friend Kasey man I loved Kasey more than anything in the world at that moment He had saved me from the worst beating I have ever known Luckily he was as sober as can be or I might have
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