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College is very important subject in high school and getting into college is also a very important topic Ive applied to 20 colleges in total however there is only one college that I am hoping to get into Eastern Illinois University is my top college that I want to get into If I attend Eastern Illinois University I think it would be a good fit for me I really think I would fit into the science field such as the nursing program and the biology major Another major I could fit into would be the music majors Since music is very fluent with me I could apply for their choir and band as well as solo instruments Eastern Illinois University study aboard program would also be a good fit for me Growing up traveling to different places and attending Eastern would give me a better chance to expand myself with different parts of the world outside the United States Eastern Illinois University has great scholarships to give away If I attend Eastern Illinois University and go into the music field I know I could fit in financially because I could receive their music scholarship Another way that helps me fit in at Eastern they give you a chance to work your fees I could work in the dining hall or help out with a sport at the same time Im giving back time to my school as well as working to stay in school This plan could work for me because I could receive the music scholarship and still receive outside scholarships to help pay for left over tuition However if that plan doesnt work I could always work at the school and have an outside job That would be helpful because I could study on the job when Im not busy or put my major to good use
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